your drawing looks good, i attached a drawing of what might be better, you dont have to use my drawing at all or anything but i added some things that might help out a little.
ok first of all, the green line water water coming in, it comes in into a small box filled with live rock rubble, there are a bunch of small holes in the side of the box so the water can flow over the live rock and out of the box, into the refugium, this way your water going into the refugium is forced pass the live rock, making the live rock more efficient in doing its job
next is the refugium, you may or may not need to put live rock in the refugium, depending what what your preference is, its all up to you.
next, instead of your barrier which original consisted of 1 wall, i put in 2 more walls, with the middle wall raised so the water will flow UNDER it, not over it, creating a 'bubble trap' is what its called, it keeps bubbles from entering the return pump area and going back into the show tank, so you wont have any bubbles going back into the show tank
hope this helps!